Tuesday, January 21, 2020

Body paragraph

        Today in class I composed a one body paragraph. The paragraph was on the certainty , doubt topic from last week. I had to create and thesis , along with the evidence to support the claim. I used evidence from Dwayne Wayde’s motivational speech. He stated that many times he thought of his hard times ,to push him to go harder. I related to that more than anything, so I chose it would be easier for me to use that .
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  1. Angel ScottJanuary 25, 2020 at 6:04 AM

    My evidence to support my claims always sound "too familiar". However, I like your evidence. I never step out my comfort zone to find evidence. Typically I use the same sources, books or something I read. I would have never thought to use a celebrity especially a sports celebrity. I applaud you.

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